Tuesday, January 28, 2014

If You Ask Me



If you ask why

I burned down my house
I will tell you.

In the morning
I came to my sacred space

Careful construction of my own hands
Over years beautiful and ornate

and every prayer
was hollow

my household gods
wore my own face.

Filled with sorrow and shame
I purified the good earth with flame

Now, because I must have some place to live
I am at peace making new bricks.


LFM

4 comments:

  1. Vivid, puts the reader right in the action. Authentic!

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    1. Ray, I appreciate your reading and response. Yes - as real as it gets.

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    1. Sarah - Thank you for this brief affirmation! Much appreciated

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